For the first half of our two hour lesson we watched our peers opening sequence and we had to offer advice on how to improve their opening scenes and give feedback on what we thought about it and what we thought the possilbe plot lines could be.
Positive Feedback for our Opening was:
Good Use of camera
Good angles and shots
Music is good but at certain gives off the feel of a TV Drama
The ending is really efective with then name fitting into the effect
Negative Feedback for our Opening was:
Length of certain shots need to be cut down
Romantic section is to focused around "Tom" and "Sophie"
And we need more cuts to show the stalker to create a lot more tension
So all of these positive and negative points were taken into accout and we began editing straight away to make these comments count. We are going to start by re-filming the fist minute of the photo pan and make sure we put the camera on widescreen
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