Audience Feedback

The group asked a few people what they thought about of our final edit. We asked them for one positive and one negative point. The answers are below:

Samantha Milne (Aged 15)

Positive: Ending – out of focus blurry but awesome
Negative: Tom and Sophie shot bit long

Lauren Farmer (Aged 16)

Positive:Music is great
Negative: Ending carried suspense

Henna Mystery (Aged 16)

Positive: Music very good – really sets the mood
Negative: The stalker should make it more obvious he is there by enhancing the ambient sound – twigs snapping?

Louise Pearson (Aged 17)

Positive:really like the dark atmosphere created through the mixture of black and white scenes and the music played. I also like the contrast between the action shots and the pans across the photos because it adds more background to the introduction; it looks more like an obsession with the photos added in
Negative: in one of the shots cutting from Sophie and Tom, to Josh through the camera, Sophie changes position from cuddling Tom to looking at the camera, then back in the next shot. This disrupts the flow of the action because it's a little distracting. Also, in the last shot, it isn't totally clear Josh is running towards the 'couple' as the first few times I thought he was running away
from them

Laura Knighton (Aged 17)

Positive:The music was awesome, the effects were very atmospheric and the end kept me in suspense
Negative: a bit repetitive of the walking around
For future questioning I need to make sure I ask same amount of males and females to eliminate bias.